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The Seeds Of Tomorrow by ~Shibara:iconShibara:



The Seeds Of Tomorrow


Rows of flowers,
Farther than the eye can see,
Growing, growing,
Living majestically.

They stand in the wind,
Tall, proud, and ever beautiful.
They haven't a thing to do but live,
And to that, they stay faithful.

All too soon,
Time passes by.
The flowers cannot continue the fight and so,
Whither and die.

They leave behind,
Seeds to grow in the spring,
And so the world continues on,
Barely seeming to feel a thing.

There will be more flowers,
To share their beauty and grace.
Why worry and cry,
Over something that isn't out of place?

The world goes on,
But there is an ache,
In the hearts of the seeds,
Left behind near the lake.

They mourn and cry,
Over the loss of the great flowers before,
But time continues and repeats,
And soon there will be more.

The world may forget,
The flowers of yesterday,
But not the seeds of tomorrow,
Nor the flowers of today.


Written by Shibara
Dedicated to my grandfather, Donald, K, Shayler.
©2009 ~Shibara
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Author's Comments

This is another dedication to my grandpa. We're going to be going to his funeral soon and I was asked if I wanted to write a poem to read out at the funeral... I knew I wouldn't be able to read it but I wrote on for him anyway.. Mom says it's good enough that she might read it but we're going to put it in a frame and I've made it look pretty, decorated with my grandpa's favourite flowers for people to read it if my Mom can't read it out herself.

Comment?? No critiques please.

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:iconrubygirl12345:
Oh my. This is really emotional. I wouldn't be able to critique it even if I wanted to and knew how..
It made me cry, so I think that you really did your best and I seriously love it.
I'm even slightly sorry that it's written for such a sad occasion..

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*nods* Thanks. I think what creeped me out the most about it though was that when I write poems that rhyme like this, it usually takes me a while to figure out the rhyme and make sure it makes sense... but for this one... it just came out in rhymes so I think it might have been my grandpa writing it and sending it to my mom and his kids through me in a way.. know what I mean?

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:iconrubygirl12345:
Not really, but I guess that if it happened to me, I'd be seriously creeped out. :noes:

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~That's why the internet was invented! To stalk those sexy sexy men.. And not have a restraining order slapped in your face.

~"When I said we were having a sleepover, that wasn't what I meant.... But you're welcome to do that again."
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XD. I mean it felt like I was an angel on earth sorta thing... I've read that guardian angels will sometimes work through other people to send their message to loved ones.

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:iconrubygirl12345:
Somehow, that sounded so sweet. :o

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~That's why the internet was invented! To stalk those sexy sexy men.. And not have a restraining order slapped in your face.

~"When I said we were having a sleepover, that wasn't what I meant.... But you're welcome to do that again."
:iconshibara:
really?? Weird XD.

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:iconrubygirl12345:
I know, right? XD

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~That's why the internet was invented! To stalk those sexy sexy men.. And not have a restraining order slapped in your face.

~"When I said we were having a sleepover, that wasn't what I meant.... But you're welcome to do that again."
:iconmarlyangeldannyfan:
wow, that was so beautiful. and so deep as well. I'm sure your grandpa is watching over you. and just know that all of us support you too.

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stupid till the point it becomes genius.
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Thank you very much. Knowing that makes it easier for me.... especially when I knew that at his funeral this Saturday... it was the only thing that kept me from just exploding into tears... my uncle wasn't so lucky... he almost couldn't handle it... being his dad that was dead and all..

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